Stefany's Birthday Surprise (needs new title) has been taken down

  
Thanks again to everyone that took the time to read SBS and sent me a critique. I have taken it down now that I have sent it to a couple of publishers. If you didn't get a chance to read it and really want to, send me a gmail and I will email it to you. (You should know what my gmail address is, or be able to figure it out.)